This week my class and I have been doing 'Sorry' to the world activities. One of the activities were to make a poem saying sorry to the earth for all our rubbish. Here is my poem.
Poem
Lives are crying because it's not clean
Earth is dying because it's not green
Grow more trees, make Mother Earth grin
Pick up your rubbish and put it in the bin
Hi, I´m Seannah from Oamaru intermediate school. I really like this poem because it is short and snappy but sends a good message. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Awatea it’s me Jackie. I really like your poem it was interesting and I say it’s fantastic to see you doing that kind of activity what you said explained everything I need to know about. My question is Do you think you could say The easy part was… The hard part was… What I could improve is… so they know what you’re good at in your poem and what you need to work on?
ReplyDeleteHi Awatea it it's me Honekai i realy like your poem that you did and the good detail that you added onto it and the good reason and your back up.
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