This week I've been learning how to write a recount and use capital letters for places and names. I wrote a story about my wish holiday that didn't really happen. 😇😇😇
Hi little Tamarangi its harmony from dance I really enjoyed reading and taking a good read of your blog. Comment on my blog its tsharmonyt.blogspot.co.nz thank you
Hi Awatea my name is Kohuroa from Tautoro School i really liked reading your story on your blog it really caught my eye and you have a lot of interesting things in your recount
Hi Awatea My name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school and I enjoyed reading your dream holidays and I honestly wish I can go there but something else I liked about your blog is that it caught my eye right away and I think you should go back and check your work and add commas and full stops but also make your writing bigger so it can be easier for the read ( ME ) to read but other then that great work and keep it up and keep going amazing work.
Hi Awatea, my name is Aja-Marie, and when I read this post, I recognised it straight away that it was Aussie. The reason I noticed it was because I had been there to, and to all of the theme parks. If you would like to visit my blog type in the URL http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Awatea, my name is Aja-Marie, and when I read this post, I recognised it straight away that it was Aussie. The reason I noticed it was because I had been there to, and to all of the theme parks. If you would like to visit my blog type in the URL http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteHi little Tamarangi its harmony from dance I really enjoyed reading and taking a good read of your blog. Comment on my blog its tsharmonyt.blogspot.co.nz thank you
ReplyDeleteHi Awatea my name is Kohuroa from Tautoro School i really liked reading your story on your blog it really caught my eye and you have a lot of interesting things in your recount
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school and I enjoyed reading your dream holidays and I honestly wish I can go there but something else I liked about your blog is that it caught my eye right away and I think you should go back and check your work and add commas and full stops but also make your writing bigger so it can be easier for the read ( ME ) to read but other then that great work and keep it up and keep going amazing work.
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HI Ruby its me Awatea thanks for commenting on my blog. Thanks for the feedback and feedforwards I really apprectate it.😇😇😇
DeleteHi Awatea, my name is Aja-Marie, and when I read this post, I recognised it straight away that it was Aussie. The reason I noticed it was because I had been there to, and to all of the theme parks. If you would like to visit my blog type in the URL http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Awatea, my name is Aja-Marie, and when I read this post, I recognised it straight away that it was Aussie. The reason I noticed it was because I had been there to, and to all of the theme parks. If you would like to visit my blog type in the URL http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
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