Well the big day has arrived. This week I have been learning how to write big descriptive words in my writing. I hope you find my descriptive words in my writing like I said.
Kia Ora Awatea, my name is Gerry and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add morew descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved. From Gerry.
Hi Awatea, my name is Carmel and I go to Waima School. I like the way you talked about the Olympics.wait this reminds me of the time on the Olympics when Samir Ait Said had really broke his leg
Kia Ora Awatea, my name is Kura and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add more descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved. From Kura.
Kia Ora Awatea, my name is Kura and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add more descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved. From Kura.
Hi Awatea, My name is Iverson I go to Tautoro school. Your story is really cool and I love the part of how you got a gold medal but next time I thought you could add a bit more detail to make your story interesting and full of things to hook your readers. Or maybe to add a smart learner framework to help you with your story. Other than that Keep the good posts up so I can view more and see if you took some advice from me. Keep the good blogging up
Kia Ora Awatea, my name is Gerry and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add morew descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved.
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DeleteHi Awatea, my name is Arihia and I go to Paihia School, I like the way you described your olympics day.
ReplyDeleteHi Arihia my name is Awatea. Thank you for commenting on my blog. Just saying this didnt actually happen its just a story. But thatnks.
DeleteHi Awatea, my name is Carmel and I go to Waima School. I like the way you talked about the Olympics.wait this reminds me of the time on the Olympics when Samir Ait Said had really broke his leg
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Awatea, my name is Kura and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add more descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved.
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Kia Ora Awatea, my name is Kura and I go to Tautoro School. I really liked the way that you put in your W.A.L.T because it helps me to read and to see if you have achieved what you are learning. Right now I think that you have achieved that because you have used amazing descriptive words to describe your story. What an amazing story. To improve I think that you should put up a story that you don't have much detail and descriptive language and post it and then add more descriptive language and detail and then post that up and see how much you have improved.
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Hi Awatea,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Iverson I go to Tautoro school. Your story is really cool and I love the part of how you got a gold medal but next time I thought you could add a bit more detail to make your story interesting and full of things to hook your readers. Or maybe to add a smart learner framework to help you with your story. Other than that Keep the good posts up so I can view more and see if you took some advice from me. Keep the good blogging up