I have been learning how to use similes in my piece of writing. But the hard part is that I have to remember to spell a word properly. The good part is that I have a good piece off writing. I can use similes in my writing.
Hi Awatea My name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school and I enjoyed reading your posted or writing it was very descriptive and very understandable it explain a lot of what you were writing and the details you have added was also amazing but the only thing I would have to say is show the places you have use your similes because it doesn't show in your work but other then that great work keep it up and keep going.
Hi my name is Awatea thanks for the comment it was very helpful. I hope you have a good piece of writting that I can read.
ReplyDeleteHi Awatea My name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school and I enjoyed reading your posted or writing it was very descriptive and very understandable it explain a lot of what you were writing and the details you have added was also amazing but the only thing I would have to say is show the places you have use your similes because it doesn't show in your work but other then that great work keep it up and keep going.
ReplyDeleteBy : Ruby